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table of contents
  1. Cover
  2. Foreword
  3. The Lays of Marie de France
    1. Prologue
    2. I. Guigemar
    3. II. Equitan
    4. III. Le Fresne
    5. IV. Bisclavret
    6. V. Lanval
    7. VI. The Two Lovers
    8. VII. Yonec
    9. VIII. Laüstic
    10. IX. Milun
    11. X. Chaitivel
    12. XI. Chevrefoil
    13. XII. Eliduc
  4. For Further Reading

XII. Eliduc

I shall tell you a Breton lay,

or at least as much of it as I may

remember and understand. There was

a knight (many begin as this does),

courtly, valiant, and of some fame.

Eliduc was this person’s name.

He and his wife, who was wise and of

an excellent family, were in love

and had lived together for many years

contentedly, but it appears

that when he went in search of paid

martial service he found a maid

he was unable to ignore.

“Beautiful” is but a poor,

inadequate adjective. Guilliadun

was her name and there was none

to rival her. Meanwhile, his spouse

remained at home and kept his house.

Her name was Guildelüec. And the lay

is about these rival women, for they

are its true subject. (But “Eliduc”

is shorter and that title took.)

I shall now tell the tale to you

that I have been assured is true.

Eliduc’s lord was Brittany’s king

who trusted him in everything

and cherished him. When the king was gone

it was Eliduc he counted on

to protect the kingdom. This can be

a golden opportunity

for any courtier but with such

prominence there can be much

jealousy from others who

think they are deserving, too.

Slanderous accusations came

from all sides so that his good name

was badly blemished. He was abused,

though never formally accused

and the king, for no specific cause,

banished him. There were no laws

he’d broken and he had served long

and well and knew the king was wrong.

He importuned the king to provide

him a chance to argue his side,

which was that the mud of slander could

befoul a man whose conduct was good.

The king refused to grant his plea

and there was no alternative — he

had to leave the country where

he’d lived for years. It was most unfair.

The rustics say of a lord that when

he chastises his plowman, then

it is not by love but only fief

that he rules — and this is my belief.

Eliduc at any rate

decided then to emigrate

across the sea to Logres, there

to refresh himself in better air.

He would leave his wife at home and he

bade his men to see that she

was well cared for, and his friends likewise.

Then, wiping the tears from her eyes,

he promised his fidelity.

He and his party went to sea

to arrive at Totnes where he found

battles over disputed ground

among the region’s kings who all

were caught up in continual brawl.

In the region, not far away

from Exeter, a wizened, gray,

but very powerful king resided

to whom Heaven had not provided

an heir; his majesty had instead

a daughter, and it may be said

that she was a great beauty, which

was a bonus, because she was so rich.

Her father had refused to award

her to the local peers: discord

followed and one of her suitors made

war on the old man. Having laid

waste his tenants’ fields, he attacked

the castle. Hearing of this fact,

Eliduc was delighted, for he

saw an opportunity

he could not ignore. He offered his aid

if it was required. He also made

the request that the king, if he had no

need of him, might let him go

with safe conduct to travel through

the land to find somebody who

might have other employment for him.

The king, knowing his prospects were dim,

welcomed the messenger warmly and told

his constable to take what gold

this baron would need for a month and find

him and his companions the kind

of lodgings they deserved. He prepared

a welcoming banquet Eliduc shared

with all the poor knights in the town.

Honoured as if he wore a crown,

Eliduc found that life again

was worth living for him and his men.

He ordered them to refuse to take

money or gifts for appearance’s sake —

at least until the fortieth day.

(They weren’t fighting just for the pay.)

On their third day, there was a great

cry through the city that at the gate

the enemy would soon appear

to assault the town, which was full of fear.

Eliduc heard this and ordered his men

to arm themselves to be ready when

the fight should come. There were forty more

knights in the town who were prisoners or

recuperating from wounds. When they

saw Eliduc prepare for the fray

they, too, readied themselves to fight

and offered their arms to the puissant knight:

“Lord,” they said, “we shall join with you

and help you in what you must do.”

He expressed his thanks to them and then

asked if any of these men

knew of a narrow pass or defile

where they might enjoy an advantage while

defending the town. One replied:

“I know of such a place beside

a dense thicket where there’s a narrow

path for a handcart or wheelbarrow.

This would be the way that they

would have to return from their first foray.

Often when they come back they are

without their armor, for spoils of war

are all their palfreys are able to bear.

It would be good to attack them there,

humiliate them and, in hot pursuit,

inflict much damage and steal their loot.”

Eliduc approved of this

plan and to encourage his

forces said to them, “Good friends,

I pledge that we shall achieve our ends.

He who never risks his all

must have a heart that is weak and small,

for only the willingness to be

defeated brings men victory.

As you are vassals of this king,

come with me and whatever thing

I do here, you must do also.

I promise that there will be no

obstacle to deter us from

the triumph that must surely come

if we stand together, and the fame

that we earn together will grace each name.”

They cheered him and then led the way

to the bushes in the wood where they

could fall upon the enemy,

which they soon did most vigorously.

The enemy was surprised and fled,

each man running just ahead

of his pursuer. It was a rout,

the king would be happy to hear about.

In fact the king was in his tower

convincing himself hour by hour

that Eliduc might have fled or, worse,

joined the enemy — a reverse

that would mean the end of the kingdom — but

in any event the gates were shut

and he ordered each man to his post

on the walls to shoot at any host

that might approach. Instead there came

a squire riding fast to claim

a victory for Eliduc.

It was like a tale in a story book

of many prisoners, many killed,

and many wounded. Cheering filled

the air and the king descended to meet

Eliduc whose swift and sweet

victory had saved the day.

Eliduc gave the prizes away

keeping for himself only three

horses of high quality.

He gave the prisoners over, too —

twenty-nine, give or take a few —

to the constable for him to hold

for the king until they were ransomed with gold.

The king, in gratitude for this great

success, gave him care of the state

for a year’s term, receiving his

allegiance in exchange for this.

Courtly, wise, and handsome, he

enjoyed a wide celebrity:

soon the king’s daughter heard

all about him and she sent word

by her chamberlain to summon him to

join her to talk, as people do.

Guilliadun was surprised she had not

met him before, and there was a lot

she wanted to hear about him from

his own lips. She bade him come,

and he replied with thanks to say

that he was already on his way.

He took a fellow knight along

so there could not be any wrong

and malicious misinterpretation

of his visit and their conversation.

When he arrived, therefore, he sent

the chamberlain first, and off he went

to announce the visitors. When they

met at last, in this formal way,

he could not help but notice that she

was as beautiful as she was kind

to have invited him. Her mind

was lively and inquisitive,

and he was diverted by their give-

and-take. She too was much impressed

by Eliduc, who seemed the best

of men. She took his hand and led

him to a seat on her daybed,

where they spoke of many things while she

considered that there could not be

a braver, better looking man

anywhere. And, as it can,

Love dispatched its mischief maker

to descend from the skies and take her

in his grasp to make her sigh

and her face go pale. She had to try

not to let him notice this

effect he had on her with his

mere presence. At length he arose

to bring the interview to a close.

Reluctantly she let him go

on his way, and he did so.

Riding home, he felt an unease

he could not quite define, for these

sighs of hers had been flattering

but also cautionary. The thing

was complicated, for she was appealing

enough to produce in him a feeling

of happiness that was inconsistent

with his marriage to the distant

woman to whom he had sworn an oath

of loyalty that he was loath

to violate, was hardly dim

in his memory, and troubled him.

On the maiden’s side there was no debate.

Her esteem for him was great

and she wanted him to be her lover.

At dawn as soon as the night was over,

she called her chamberlain to her side.

(She trusted him and could confide

her deepest secrets to him.) She said:

“I love this soldier. All last night

I could not close my eyes. My plight

is most unfortunate. Either he

will return my love and live with me,

as almost any man would do

if he had an ambition to

sit on a throne and wear a crown.

Otherwise, my heart is down

as I think of the alternative,

for I shall be unwilling to live.”

As the echo of her words was dying

it was replaced by muffled crying.

The chamberlain reflected upon

all this and gave his opinion on

what she should do. “You must let him know

how you are feeling. Either say so

or send him a sash or a ring that will speak

as clearly to him about what you seek.

If he responds to this as he should,

the outcome cannot be but good.

What emperor is there on the earth

who would not be glad if one of your worth

wanted his love? You must provide

the opening he will throw wide.”

She answered him, “How can I tell

from here if he thinks ill or well

of such a gesture? Whatever he

may feel, he will accept from me

and keep any token I may send.

If he be enemy rather than friend,

he could enjoy the chance to make

a joke of me for vanity’s sake.

Report to me what you can read

in his face and voice, to which give heed

as well as you can. He may betray

his true feelings either way.

Greet him a thousand times for me

and we shall see what we shall see.”

Forthwith, the chamberlain departed,

while she remained behind. She started

to call him back but changed her mind.

She was more than vexed to find

her heart had been taken unawares

by a stranger, for in these affairs

she had no practice. Who was he,

a member of the nobility

or a commoner? In any case,

he would leave and go someplace

else, and she will be left to mourn,

sorry that she was ever born

and feeling stupid, giving way

to a whim as she had done today.

She had only met him yesterday

and this morning she had sent to say

that she was begging for his love.

But the die was cast with no way of

going back. He would have a reply

that she would flourish or die by.

The chamberlain, meanwhile, made haste

to deliver the ring and the sash for the waist

to Eliduc. The knight seemed pleased

as he took the sash and the ring he eased

onto his finger. Of course, he sent

his thanks and every compliment

back to her. But he said no more

except to offer the chamberlain for

his services a gift that he

declined, albeit courteously.

The servant returned to his lady who

asked him if he had any clue

that might somehow make manifest

Eliduc’s feelings. He expressed

his confidence that the knight was not

a fickle person. “He knows what

you meant and he meant. I believe

it was not his purpose to deceive.”

“But what did he give you in return?

Nothing? Did he mean to spurn

my display of importunity,

consigning me to misery?”

The chamberlain replied, “I’d say

he could have found another way

to express a lack of interest than

by accepting your gifts. He’s not a man

to give offence inadvertently

to a lady and to chivalry.”

“I know he does not hate me, for I

never gave him cause. If my

love tokens elicit no

response from him, then abject woe

is what he deserves. But I go mad.

I cannot think until I have had

a chance to speak with him vis-à-vis

and judge his attitude toward me.

I will let him see how I

suffer, and he’ll be affected by

pity for me. But even so,

what will that mean? How can I know

if he will stay with me? Dear Lord!”

Her hopes and doubts of her heart warred.

“He and the king have both agreed

on a year of service. Would you need

more time than that to learn if he

desires you reciprocally?”

This cheering news improved her state

of mind at once. If she had a year,

she had rather less reason for fear.

She had no notion that, for his part,

Eliduc was sad at heart,

unable to take pleasure from

the joys of life that did not come

from thinking of her. But even this

was mixed with bitterness for his

promise to his wife. His brain

told him clearly that he should remain

faithful to her, but in his breast

were feelings that could not be suppressed.

Guilliadun’s charms were more than he

could ignore, and he desired to be

with her, near her, talking, embracing,

and more. But he knew he was facing

dishonour if he let himself go

a step in that direction, so

he temporized — and his distress

persisted, worsened, and in the end he

went to find a modus vivendi

to see the king and, if he could,

the maiden as well and find some good

answer that would leave all three

in honour and in dignity.

The king had finished his meal and gone

to his daughter’s chambers to look on

as a chess master from overseas

schooled her in the intricacies

of play, and it was to this room

that Eliduc was led by a groom

and announced. The king at once invited

the guest to take a chair. The knight did.

Then to his daughter the king gave

the instruction that this noble and brave

knight should be given honour, for he

is one in five hundred. She

was happy to be ordered to do

what she would have, impromptu.

She arose and led him to a seat

across the room where their discreet

words might not be overheard,

which at first appeared absurd

because she dared not speak directly

to him. At length the knight, correctly,

thanked her for the presents he

had received from her, and to this she

said she was glad to hear this for

it was a gift that meant much more —

with the ring and sash she had given her-

self, body and soul, as it were.

She wanted to become his wife.

Otherwise, for the rest of her life,

she would accept no other man.

Then she asked him for his plan.

“Lady,” he said, “I am grateful to you,

and your esteem means much. I do

swear to you I will never forget it.

My oath, to which you may give credit,

requires me to stay a year

in service to your father here.

After that, I plan to leave

and return home. I do not deceive

or mean to mislead you in any way.”

To this, all the lady could say

was: “I thank you profusely. You

are wise and will know what to do

about me by the time the year

has come to an end. I do not fear,

for along with my love you have my trust,

and I know you will be kind and just.”

This was by far the best outcome

Eliduc could have hoped for from

their conversation. He had survived

an awkwardness and they had contrived

a way in which he could still see

and talk with her and yet feel free

of those pangs of guilt that otherwise

might have obnubilated their skies.

Meanwhile, his martial efforts were so

successful that the king’s arch foe

he managed to capture and liberate

the entire land. It seemed that fate

was smiling upon him. His reputation

grew by the day throughout the nation.

But then a messenger from his lord

at home arrived: by fire and sword

his land was being laid waste and he

was losing castles. Belatedly

he regretted his having banished such

a fellow as Eliduc — whom he much

needed now. Those who had

accused him and had given bad

advice about him were banished now

forever. “By your oath and vow,

I call you home in my time of great

need. You must not hesitate

but come at once, as I know you will.”

These words could not help but fill

Eliduc with perturbation.

Love was the cause of his agitation,

a pure love on which there had not

ever been even the slightest spot

of sinfulness — except for the slight

omission on the part of the knight

to say he was married. Of his intention

to return to his wife, he should have made mention.

Her hope, as he well knew, was that she

might marry him, though this would be

unthinkable in Christian practice.

“Alas,” he said, “the simple fact is

that I have been here too long and I

must leave not only this land but my

beloved, whom I’ll miss. I should

have known that life, when it seems good,

is only preparing us for a fall

that is sure to follow. To my lord’s call

I must respond. I cannot refuse,

even if I fear that the news

may be her death or even my own.

But I need not face the question alone.

With Guillaidun I shall discuss

the constraints that have entangled us

and I shall do as she says, for I know

she will realize that I must go.

Her father’s lands are now at peace

and he can well afford to release

me from my promise to him when my

service at home is required by

my own liege lord. I shall explain

all this to her and ascertain

her wishes. Whatever she may decide,

I shall let her be my guide.”

Forthwith, the knight went to the king

both to tell him the news and to bring

the letter for him to read. It was clear

that there was no way to keep him here,

but even so he offered the knight

treasure and something more that might

detain him — a third of the kingdom. But no,

Eliduc said he had to go:

“My lord is in distress and I

must go to him at once, but my

promise to you is that if there be

a moment of need, then instantly

I shall return with a force of men

to do what I can to help you again.”

For this the king was grateful. He gave

much gold and silver and many brave

dogs and horses. Some of this

Eliduc accepted as his

proper earnings. With exquisite

tact, he asked if he could visit

the king’s daughter in order to say

goodbye to her in a gracious way.

The king was pleased by this request

and a squire was sent as his behest

to arrange the meeting. As soon as he

appeared in her apartment, she

greeted him a thousand times

(poets exaggerate in rhymes).

He began to explain his quandary

but before he had finished, she

saw where his argument was leading

and she fainted away, succeeding

in arranging things so that Eliduc

even without thinking took

her into his arms and, having gone

so far, found himself going on

to kiss her mouth and weep with her.

“Sweet love,” he heard himself aver,

“you are my life and death; you are my

comfort and my best hope. I

have taken leave of your father, but you

are the one to decide what I must do,

whatever the consequences. I can’t

take you with me, as much as I want

to do that. I would seem to betray

my oath to your father. But set a day

by which you want me to come back here

and I promise you that I’ll reappear,

only providing that I still live.

That being the case, then give

me your leave to go.” That seemed

acceptable, though not what she’d dreamed.

But because of her love for him she had

to let him go, although she was sad

to say goodbye. They gave and took

rings and kisses, and Eliduc,

having temporized, departed,

his pain diminishing after he’d started.

At home his lord was joyful when

he returned, as was his wife, but then

that was to be expected. She still

was beautiful, wise, and good, but the thrill

of their reunion was somewhat less

than it should have been. His happiness

was torn by his vivid memories of

Guillaidun and of their love.

Conflicted as he was, his mood

was dark and he was so subdued

that his wife was worried about him. She

asked him what the matter could be.

Had he heard some slanderer say

she’d misbehaved in any way

when he was gone? If this was the case,

she would be glad of a chance to face

any accuser and prove that she

had been all a wife was supposed to be.

He managed to answer that he had not

accused her or ever doubted her. What

was troubling him was another thing

altogether — he’d given a king

his word to serve for a year and yet

here he was, having seemed to forget

a promise, or even worse, to break

an oath he’d given. She should not mistake

the cause of his discomfort. He was

persuasive enough, explaining the cause

of his abstraction. He and his lord

took actions that were moving toward

a restoration of order and peace

in which the various parties could cease

their skirmishing. With this behind

him, Eliduc could set his mind

on Guilladun and returning to

her. He took only a few

companions: two nephews and their

squires, a servant . . . He had them swear

to silence, which they were willing to do.

He put to sea and this small crew

soon arrived on the other side,

and although he did not exactly hide,

he found a quiet out-of-the-way

inn at which his party could stay.

He sent his chamberlain to tell

his beloved that all was now well

and that he had kept his word. That night

she was to go where the servant might

lead her — out of town to a place

where he would be waiting for her embrace.

The servant changed his garments and went

to the king’s palace where he’d been sent

and there he asked for an interview

with the princess and was shown into

her chambers. When she heard him speak

her mood, which had been dark and bleak,

brightened at once. She even kissed

the servant, having so much missed

his master. He recited all

the details of how, after nightfall,

they would proceed together to

the spot arranged for a rendezvous.

She was willing and eager and they

together managed to get away

from the castle and the town, though she

was afraid at each step lest there be

someone who might recognize her

or someone’s spy about to surprise her.

Not more than a bow-shot from

the city’s gate, concealed by some

woods, there was a meadow where

Eliduc waited. When she got there

he dismounted to kiss and embrace

his beloved. Then, with easy grace,

he helped her mount. He got up, too,

and they rode off to meet the crew

on a ship at Totnes he had arranged.

They boarded and, before the wind changed,

put to sea. For the first few hours

they made good progress, but nature’s powers

turned on them and the ship rolled

and pitched as the weather worsened. Cold

winds whipped the rain and spray

into an angry froth that they

could neither escape from nor sail through.

It got so bad that one of the crew

cried aloud: “What do we think

we’re doing? We’re all going to sink

because of that woman you brought along,

knowing full well that you did wrong.

At home you have a loyal wife

but you are willing to risk your life

and ours for the sake of this one! No!

Cast her overboard. Let her go.

And the storm will abate and we shall be

saved without the taint that she

brings with her!” Almost mad

with anger at what he just had

heard, Eliduc shouted: “Son

of a whore, if you say even one

more word, you die!” He held, meanwhile,

the girl in his arms because the vile

weather had made her sea-sick and he

was trying to comfort her. But she,

having heard what the sailor said,

fainted away as if she were dead —

or that is what Eliduc thought she was.

Angry that without any cause

the sailor had said such a dreadful thing,

he picked up an oar and took a swing

at the sailor, knocking him flat on the deck

and very possibly breaking his neck.

With the toe of his boot Eliduc shoved

him overboard. The woman he’d loved

was hardly benefited, but he

took some satisfaction that she

had been avenged. In a moment or two

the villain’s body sank from view.

Eliduc went to the helm to steer

the vessel into the harbor and here

drop anchor. He looked again and she

lay motionless and appeared to be

indeed dead. His lamentation

was loud as was his supplication

that he should have died with her. But now

he realized that the question was how

properly to bury her.

A king’s daughter one should inter

in consecrated ground with a fine

and stately service as a sign

of respect that she was entitled to.

He asked for suggestions from the crew

but none had any to propose.

In Eliduc’s memory there arose

the thought of a wood near home wherein

a hermit had lived, wizened and thin,

and he had built a chapel where

those inclined might say a prayer.

This was not far from his home and he

decided that the chapel could be

her resting place. It was holy ground,

and to her memory he could found

an abbey or convent devoted to

prayer and penitence. He and his crew

carried the lady’s body there

and he required them all to swear

another oath of silence. They

traveled all night and at the break of day

came to the chapel where they knocked

and called. The front door was unlocked

and they went inside to find the tomb

of the hermit. They could read in the gloom

the date of his death: eight days before

his fresh grave had been dug in the floor.

The others thought that this was what

they should do for the lady, but

Eliduc wanted advice from wise

men who could properly analyze

cannon law about the way

to found an abbey or church. When they

had made this clear, he would know better

the rules in their spirit and their letter.

In the meantime, they’d lay her out

before the chapel altar, devout

but unspecific. He wanted no

errors in any punctilio

that might apply to her resting place.

He said goodbye and kissed her face,

telling her how deep was his regret

that they had ever met — and yet

she had been his greatest delight.

Never again would he deign to fight

but he promised, when she was buried, to take

holy orders and, for her sake,

keep a vigil here at her tomb,

sharing with her its constant gloom.

This was his promise to the poor

girl as he closed the chapel door.

He had sent word home to tell

his wife that he was coming, unwell

and sick at heart but alive. She was

pleased and did as a good wife does,

meeting him to welcome him back,

but she found his mood and mien were black.

He spoke to no one and no one dared

address him. Although the household spared

no efforts to see to his comfort, he

was the picture of human misery.

After two days at home he heard

mass and then, without a word,

went back to the chapel to pray

at the altar where the lady lay.

She had not recovered consciousness.

She did not seem to breathe much less

move. But he thought her colour was good

for someone who, as he understood,

had been dead for days. He wept

in anguish and prayed for her while he kept

beating his breast until his grief

had brought him a modicum of relief.

Then he returned to his house and the same

brooding over his guilt and shame.

The wife grew increasingly alert

to his moods by which she was puzzled and hurt.

She asked one of her servants if he

could follow surreptitiously

and report to her where Eliduc went

every day: his emolument

would be a set of arms and a horse.

He was delighted and, of course,

agreed to do this. On the next day

he followed his master all the way

to the chapel where, not far from the door

he heard the lamentations pour

forth from the knight and cries of woe.

He returned home to let the wife know

where it was that Eliduc went

and what he did there. What this meant

she could not guess. The hermit had died

but that was a while ago. She tried

to account for such a show of grief

that seemed to her beyond belief.

That afternoon, the husband had

an appointment with the king and, clad

in his finest, went to court — so she

exploited this opportunity

of going with the servant to

the chapel in search of any clue.

There on a catafalque the maid

on a bed of lovely flowers was laid,

the skin pale, the body slender,

her beauty enough to account for tender

feelings of any man. She knew

at once that here was the object that drew

her husband’s presence, and evidence of

his passionate and abiding love,

which might, after her death, have turned

to pity. The wife felt herself spurned

so that never again could she

imagine a moment’s felicity.

In a trance she knelt down to the floor

and began to pray — not so much for

the soul of the lady as for her own,

feeling that she was all alone,

worse off than the woman on the bed,

who knew that peace we assume the dead

probably have. But then from out

of a cranny, came a weasel snout

and the rest of the animal that ran

across the body. The serving man

struck it with a stick and the blow

killed it — or that seemed to be so.

But another weasel appeared and it

came up to the first, poked it a bit

with its forepaw, and sniffed but could

not make it move. It ran to the wood

in search of some herbal medicine

and soon it was back and it put in

the mouth of the other a brilliant red

flower that brought it back from the dead.

The lady, having witnessed these

strange events, got up from her knees

and ordered her servant not to allow

the weasel to get away. Somehow

he managed to graze it with his stick

which was enough to do the trick

for from its mouth it dropped the flower

that had such great restorative power.

The lady snatched it, put it in

the maiden’s mouth, and watched her begin

to breathe again and then to move

a finger and from this to improve.

Soon she revived and opened her eyes

to remark in a tone of mild surprise:

“How long I have slept!” The wife

thanked the Lord from whom comes life

and asked the maiden to tell her name,

and how she got here, and whence she came.

The maiden answered pleasantly, “I

was born in the land of Logres, where my

father is the king. I loved a knight

named Eliduc, a man of might

and valour, with whom I ran away

only to find out to my dismay

that he was married. He had not said

a word about a wife. Instead

he had lied to me and I

fainted, although I did not die.

I am left in a distant land,

abandoned. I do not understand

how he could have done this to

one to whom he swore to be true —

even though the story is old

of gullible maidens and often told.”

“My dear,” the other said, “he has been

distraught, for the trance that you were in

he took for death. Now every day

he comes here to this chapel to pray

for you or even to you. I

am his wife and couldn’t stand by

and see him in such deep despair.

I followed him to find out where

he went and I discovered you.

I’m joyful, as he will be too.

I shall return you to him and free

him to be with you. As for me

I shall take the veil and live

in a convent as a contemplative.”

The girl revived and was comforted

by what the generous wife had said.

Back home she sent a servant to

her husband to report the new

development. Without delay

Eliduc mounted and sped away.

When he arrived home, amazed,

he saw the girl alive and gazed

into her eyes to ascertain

that she was no figment of his brain

but a real person. He kissed her face

and held her in a warm embrace,

and the wife, seeing this, demanded

to be let go now. She was candid

and said she wanted to be a nun,

which would be convenient for everyone.

If Eliduc could only transfer

a suitable tract of land to her

she’d found an abbey, not far away

from the hermitage. What could he say?

Grateful, relieved, he of course agreed

to everything she had asked, for he’d

feared a much knottier complication.

The wife took the veil of consecration

with thirty other nuns. With these

who were dedicated to pieties

and good works she established a life

that was even better than being a wife.

Eliduc married the princess the way

he’d hoped to do. Their wedding day

was elegant with many guests

and impressive services. The tests

of life were past, and they lived together

in a climate of only balmy weather.

They distributed much in alms to the poor

and the love they shared was deep and secure.

At length they reached that age when they

began to think of how best to obey

God’s will and express their gratitude.

It was, then, in this pious mood

that Eliduc had a church erected

for which a visiting architect did

a splendid job. With the silver and gold

and tracts of land that would uphold

the brothers, Eliduc also lavished

gems on the order he established.

Then he joined it as a servant

of almighty God. And his wife, in fervent

agreement, joined the nunnery where

the first wife was the abbess and there

the two of them lived in harmony

like sisters in a family.

They prayed that a merciful God might look

with favor upon their Eliduc

as he in his turn asked for their

salvation in an earnest prayer.

From time to time in letters they

sent and received, each could convey

good wishes and ask how the others fared.

Each one of them loved God and cared

about the others, and each one came

to a good end, free of any blame.

It is from the story of these three

that the Bretons composed this lay to be

a memorialization of

the possibilities of love.

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